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Dark soul ch11Chapter11-  
 
As the day became night once more and a full moon rose in the black sky, a silver dagger gleamed in the street light.   
Tom walked to the front door and let himself in. He’d never been privileged enough to have his own set of keys to a girls places before, then again he’d never really hung around with a vampire before either. He walked into the lifeless house and silently searched for Sita. He was keen to impress after his latest mission. He found her in the study sitting on the floor beside the fire, the flames dancing in her eyes like fire on the water. They seemed to be bluer than ever. &# Dark soul ch11
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Dark Soul ch10Chapter 10  The early morning sunlight was just starting to creep into the sky and steal the night once more as she walked through the front door. A long walk and a full stomach had calmed her nerves and helped to clear her mind. She could her Tom still sleeping. Not that he snored, fare from it, he was as quiet as a mouse. However humans breath very differently when they sleep. It was like a calming music track playing somewhere in the house. It had been along time since she had brought someone to her home. When she thought about this fact deep she remembered the last time she brought someone home she killed them. A smile wiped across h Dark Soul ch10
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Dark Soul ch9Chapter 9   
The cold air tried to sting her skin but failed. She walked with a sense of urgent anxiety. So many thoughts running through her head why was he here now? Why couldn’t he just disappear like a bad dream?  
 
“My whole life’s been a bad dream” she spoke softly, as if the wind would answer her back with some divine wisdom. But there was no answer. Just a slight whistle as it whipped through a broken window.   
She liked to walk. It always helped to clear her thoughts and clarify her busy mind. She closed her eyes and let her mind wonder as she walked. No longer in this city, but thr Dark Soul ch9
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Dark Soul ch8“are you ok?”  Tom looked worried, but then again he usually did. He was staring down at Sita who was lying on the settee soaked in sweat.  
”I’m fine”  ”Are you sure? You were talking in your sleep, well to be honest you were kind of screaming at some points”  Oh God what have a said? I can’t let him no too much, he wont understand. He wont no how to let get when the time comes.  
 
“Just a bad dream. Don’t look so worried, you think everything is a sign to the apocalypse. I just had a bad dream, vampires dream to you no”   
“You were saying D Dark Soul ch8
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Thu Aug 16, 2007, 6:27 AM
This is my first entry and i just want to explain my i'm on here. well i'm doing a project i set out on just to try my hand at a little creative writing.

I used the main character from another book that i liked and then tried to put them into a situation of my own making, using the character as a guide to help start the flow of my story.

If you have the time to reasd than please give lots of feedback good or bad, even if you hate it i really want to know. I'm looking for some other opinions of my writing and i know its not great (i always change things when i read through my own writing) but i have plenty of time to improve (im only 13 lol) so please give me some honest feedback if you read and enjoy.

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~sam023 Sep 24, 2007, 10:09:06 PM
I've read some of the chapters and they are great, I'm a fan of story writing and I like reading them. I read more when I have a bit more time because of school and coursework but they are really good and interesting. :)
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~wishinglolita Sep 16, 2007, 6:33:40 AM
thank you very much for the comment ♥ it means a lot

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I like to make believe something's there even when Im all alone, I like to talk to things that can't listen or talk back, and I like to spend my nights thinking about the possibilities of tomorrow.
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Mood: Adoration ~M1STAK3S Sep 7, 2007, 12:00:38 PM
Thank you for the comment!!
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~abender777 Aug 27, 2007, 9:45:55 PM
Thanks for the fav yay :D
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~5-4-3-2 Aug 21, 2007, 4:45:17 AM
thanks for the fav, i was starting to think i was the only person who liked that picture =p
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~abender777 Aug 20, 2007, 9:44:26 AM
yay thanks for the fav! :D
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~Condemned-2-Darkness Aug 17, 2007, 5:47:09 PM
ta for the fav luv :)

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~dyingroses Aug 17, 2007, 8:47:11 AM
hey thanks for the fav. and the story is still really good. keep it up!
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Mood: Joy =sleyf Aug 17, 2007, 7:04:24 AM
Thanks for commenting and welcome to DA!

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Darn it...like a sock!
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Mood: Happy ~dyingroses Aug 16, 2007, 11:08:05 AM
so the story goes on. YEAH!
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